The Weight of Failure
Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2025 1:27 pm
[ Continued From Here.. ]
Commander Delion stood in the descending corridor of the Crimson Cloud as the landing lights along the floor pulsed red beneath his boots. Outside the thick viewing glass, Bhalia loomed—a jagged sprawl of golden towers covered in vines, fluttering imperial banners, and endless columns of soldiers stretching from the skyports to the city’s ivory gates.
To most aboard, it was a return to safety—to the normalcy of home and hierarchy. But to Delion, it felt like the beginning of his own trial.
The Crimson Cloud groaned as it broke through the lowest atmospheric ring. Massive docking pylons began to unfold from the hangar cliffs, guided by arcanic energy rings, ready to receive the warship.
As they touched down, Delion exhaled slowly through his nose.
His mission was supposed to be straightforward—subjugate Helidor, stabilize the northern half of Muu, and initiate the empire’s greater objective: the imperialization of Continents Muu and Madeira beneath Bhalian control.
Instead, Helidor burned—but so did thousands of his own. And worse... During the sanctioned hunt for the Velkyr, a Mazoku Executioner had fallen in battle.
By the hands of a single human woman.
Delion’s brow creased at the memory, jaw tightening with restrained disdain.
The damage to his fleet was catastrophic. The Crimson Legion was splintered. Whole detachments dissolved. Reconnaissance wings lost in smoke and flame. Over a hundred Joro soldiers lay mutilated in the ashen ruins of the Onyx Trench. Not to mention the casualties brought on by their own captain; The Nissagro elv.. whose strength, while formidable, proved disastrously incompatible with coordinated warfare. Her berserker rampage in Helidor had cost them more lives than the enemy’s front line.
The surviving infantry, fewer than three thousand, had been scattered like embers across a battlefield gone cold.
But what disturbed him most wasn’t the attrition.
It was her.
That human—who not only killed a Mazoku Executioner, but departed with his remains like a trophy, as if to mock their legend and divinity.
“Tactless.. savage creatures.”
Delion’s knuckles tightened behind his back. He’d seen it with his own eyes. He’d watched her in real time—saw how she carved through elite formations with impossible speed and surgical brutality. There was no spell signature. No recognizable martial form. Only foreign weapons and tailored technology designed to tear through Mazoku physiology.
She was fast; her movements were death incarnate. And now, every angle of her face was logged in the high-priority databases of the Muzan Index—flagged red as a national threat.
One he failed to neutralize.
Word would spread. Even if he buried the mission under layers of black-coded protocol, rumors would find their way into the mess halls, the barracks, the temples.
A Mazoku slain.
That kind of heresy didn’t stay buried.
To Bhalia, the Mazoku were sacrosanct—godlike, eternal, untouchable. Their blood was the Empire’s crown jewel, their presence a constant, terrifying assurance of divine rule. A Mazoku Executioner hadn’t fallen in battle in over a thousand years.
And now Delion was the one who had deployed one. Consecutively, without rest. Without proper rotation. Kuran was one of the oldest living monuments of a sacred and dwindling population.
Delion could already feel the blade of responsibility pressing against his neck.
If the Zenith saw fit to make an example… his feared his head would would be adorned on a pike.
–
The landing clamps hissed as the Crimson Cloud settled onto the steaming tarmac of Dock 9. And as the engines shut down, a deep and heavy silence fell upon the ship. One that the Joro commander felt settled on his shoulders as he turned on his heel.
“Prep my council chamber. I’ll be present before the High Palace at dawn.”
“Uhm—excuse me Commander,” came the reply from the Joro adjutant at his side. “But you have not been summoned to the High Palace. According to the homeland reports, it would appear our Zenith is currently, uhn—offland.”
“Offland?” Delion's brow arched, and his blackened his suddenly alit with opportunity.
“A change of plans then.” He said, and a thin smile curled his lips to his pointed ears.
Thousands of his warriors were ash—but if Bhalia was anything, it was a forge of soldiers.
He didn't inquire as to why, or what could have occurred to have caused The Emperor to rise from his throne. It was stunning, but Delion wouldn't waste the opening. In the time allotted, he would mass a new legion before Akundae's return. One Stronger. Hungrier. And larger than what he'd initially been afforded. He was still the acting Commander and Chief of the Bhalian Armada, and until that title was stripped of him, he would move like fire.
“Have the Goblin Tinkerers refit the ship—and prepare for me a new battalion of infantrymen.” He barked as he strode toward the lowered ramp of the ship, his cape fluttering in his urgency. “I want the Vox Mariners within the waters of Edo by dusk, I want a flock of the Cyr Avians Elvs casting a shadow over their soil. Summon the Ulnor Giants.. And issue a partition for another Executioner.”
He stopped at the top of the ramp, eyes gleaming. “And tell the Nissagro and The Frost Jack to report to me at once. We leave in twelve hours.. and shall not underestimate our foe again.”
The Joro adjutant bowed and tapped a glyph on their headset, voice echoing across the Crimson Cloud’s intercoms as Delion disappeared into the firelight of the city beyond.
Commander Delion stood in the descending corridor of the Crimson Cloud as the landing lights along the floor pulsed red beneath his boots. Outside the thick viewing glass, Bhalia loomed—a jagged sprawl of golden towers covered in vines, fluttering imperial banners, and endless columns of soldiers stretching from the skyports to the city’s ivory gates.
To most aboard, it was a return to safety—to the normalcy of home and hierarchy. But to Delion, it felt like the beginning of his own trial.
The Crimson Cloud groaned as it broke through the lowest atmospheric ring. Massive docking pylons began to unfold from the hangar cliffs, guided by arcanic energy rings, ready to receive the warship.
As they touched down, Delion exhaled slowly through his nose.
His mission was supposed to be straightforward—subjugate Helidor, stabilize the northern half of Muu, and initiate the empire’s greater objective: the imperialization of Continents Muu and Madeira beneath Bhalian control.
Instead, Helidor burned—but so did thousands of his own. And worse... During the sanctioned hunt for the Velkyr, a Mazoku Executioner had fallen in battle.
By the hands of a single human woman.
Delion’s brow creased at the memory, jaw tightening with restrained disdain.
The damage to his fleet was catastrophic. The Crimson Legion was splintered. Whole detachments dissolved. Reconnaissance wings lost in smoke and flame. Over a hundred Joro soldiers lay mutilated in the ashen ruins of the Onyx Trench. Not to mention the casualties brought on by their own captain; The Nissagro elv.. whose strength, while formidable, proved disastrously incompatible with coordinated warfare. Her berserker rampage in Helidor had cost them more lives than the enemy’s front line.
The surviving infantry, fewer than three thousand, had been scattered like embers across a battlefield gone cold.
But what disturbed him most wasn’t the attrition.
It was her.
That human—who not only killed a Mazoku Executioner, but departed with his remains like a trophy, as if to mock their legend and divinity.
“Tactless.. savage creatures.”
Delion’s knuckles tightened behind his back. He’d seen it with his own eyes. He’d watched her in real time—saw how she carved through elite formations with impossible speed and surgical brutality. There was no spell signature. No recognizable martial form. Only foreign weapons and tailored technology designed to tear through Mazoku physiology.
She was fast; her movements were death incarnate. And now, every angle of her face was logged in the high-priority databases of the Muzan Index—flagged red as a national threat.
One he failed to neutralize.
Word would spread. Even if he buried the mission under layers of black-coded protocol, rumors would find their way into the mess halls, the barracks, the temples.
A Mazoku slain.
That kind of heresy didn’t stay buried.
To Bhalia, the Mazoku were sacrosanct—godlike, eternal, untouchable. Their blood was the Empire’s crown jewel, their presence a constant, terrifying assurance of divine rule. A Mazoku Executioner hadn’t fallen in battle in over a thousand years.
And now Delion was the one who had deployed one. Consecutively, without rest. Without proper rotation. Kuran was one of the oldest living monuments of a sacred and dwindling population.
Delion could already feel the blade of responsibility pressing against his neck.
If the Zenith saw fit to make an example… his feared his head would would be adorned on a pike.
–
The landing clamps hissed as the Crimson Cloud settled onto the steaming tarmac of Dock 9. And as the engines shut down, a deep and heavy silence fell upon the ship. One that the Joro commander felt settled on his shoulders as he turned on his heel.
“Prep my council chamber. I’ll be present before the High Palace at dawn.”
“Uhm—excuse me Commander,” came the reply from the Joro adjutant at his side. “But you have not been summoned to the High Palace. According to the homeland reports, it would appear our Zenith is currently, uhn—offland.”
“Offland?” Delion's brow arched, and his blackened his suddenly alit with opportunity.
“A change of plans then.” He said, and a thin smile curled his lips to his pointed ears.
Thousands of his warriors were ash—but if Bhalia was anything, it was a forge of soldiers.
He didn't inquire as to why, or what could have occurred to have caused The Emperor to rise from his throne. It was stunning, but Delion wouldn't waste the opening. In the time allotted, he would mass a new legion before Akundae's return. One Stronger. Hungrier. And larger than what he'd initially been afforded. He was still the acting Commander and Chief of the Bhalian Armada, and until that title was stripped of him, he would move like fire.
“Have the Goblin Tinkerers refit the ship—and prepare for me a new battalion of infantrymen.” He barked as he strode toward the lowered ramp of the ship, his cape fluttering in his urgency. “I want the Vox Mariners within the waters of Edo by dusk, I want a flock of the Cyr Avians Elvs casting a shadow over their soil. Summon the Ulnor Giants.. And issue a partition for another Executioner.”
He stopped at the top of the ramp, eyes gleaming. “And tell the Nissagro and The Frost Jack to report to me at once. We leave in twelve hours.. and shall not underestimate our foe again.”
The Joro adjutant bowed and tapped a glyph on their headset, voice echoing across the Crimson Cloud’s intercoms as Delion disappeared into the firelight of the city beyond.